It was such a huge file I had to cut it up into two parts! D: I couldn't export it as a quicktime nor a flash file!
So watch both and tell me what I need to fix. I'm worried about the text since it seems too fast. It's for a contest but I'm not submitting it just yet.
There is a lack of stablishing shots. Some of the cuts happen to fast for one to actually realise what is going on. Stills can work, but if you do not give them secondary animation they look flat and dead. The story is interesting, almost intriguing.
yeah, I know. I'm too lazy to do any extra animation to amp up the scenes. I rarely animate so you can probably tell that from the animation and I never took any film course.